Q. This was addressed in the thesis (as a result of a minor correction). How might this learning be transferred in this context?
This was addressed in the 'delimitations of scope' and in great detail in the 'scope and selection of contributions in the lit review' (section 2.1, pg. 27-8).
- The section includes an description of a general definition for CM
- different areas in which the term CM is used
- notes three notable differences that make it unique
These three differences include:
- domain to be represented
- scope and level of abstraction
- process to be followed to create a conceptual model
Q. Where can this discussion be incorporated?
It is either:
1. Incorporate into the introduction
2. A new section
Likely to be 2.
Q. What exact changes should be made?
Q. Will PA approve of the changes to be made?
dIFFERENT TYPES OF cm;
LOGICAL MODELS http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Logic_model
Deductive-nomological model
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Deductive-nomological_model
Notes from the reviewers:
How is “simulation” conceptual modeling
different than other types of conceptual
modeling? Can this same proposed 7-phase
method be applied to any other conceptual
modeling? Why or why not?
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How is the proposed conceptual modeling
procedure different than conceptual mapping, logical modeling, nomological
modeling, scientific modeling, and other types of conceptual
modeling procedures that the academics
currently follow? I think this is vital part that is missing from this
manuscript. Unless the author can do a
great job convincing reviewers that this is a new and unique procedure that
is needed by the supply chain academics, the motivation to publish this study
is simply not there.
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